Part of USS Paramount: Episode 3 | Trapped Inside and Bravo Fleet: Labyrinth

Act Two: Pulled In

USS Paramount (NCC-75570), Alpha Quadrant
Stardate: 240109.09 | 09:45
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The Paramount made with graceful ease a shift from faster-than-light travel to sublight speeds. As it came back to relative space and exited the warp field around it the fabric of space seemed to ripple momentarily before settling into a calm stillness. Navigational thrusters engaged in moving the ship with precision as it moved smoothly into its designated position.

Nitus walked from the rear of the bridge to the command area as the Paramount dropped out of warp. The subtle hum from the ship signaled to her the transition back to sublight speeds. Her eyes flicked to the viewport, where the starfield had snapped into a coherent tapestry of distant points of light.

“Anything on sensors,” she asked her voice calm and flat but authoritative.

“Yes, ma'am," Laura responded from the science console. “I'm detecting strong readings of gravimetric radiation just beyond the ship.”

Nitus nodded at the update looking out of the viewscreen feeling the all-too-familiar weight of responsibility settle on her shoulders. A weight that if anyone else on her ship was put under they would surely crack, but she had to stand strong not only for her sake but the ones under her command as well.

“Continue on course at quarter impulse power,” she ordered. “Ms. Jackson, begin long-range scans. Let's see what else is out there.”


Nitus sat in her ready room as she waited for more information from her senior staff. She had come to appreciate how efficiently they carried out her commands, their professionalism, and skill a testament to the high standards of Starfleet.

Breaking the calm atmosphere of her private space was the emergency klaxon and the red lights she had grown to associate with danger. She moved briskly onto the bridge.

“Report!” she said urgently crossing the space from the door to her chair in a blur.

Laura moved quickly trying to scan what was transpiring. “Commander, we're detecting a large spike in gravimetric radiation,” she reported, her tone calm but urgent. “It's off the charts. Something big is happening.”

Nitus' eyes narrowed. “Source?”

“Unknown, ma'am,” Laura said, her fingers moving quickly across her console and dancing over the controls. “But it's escalating rapidly. Wait-," she paused, panic overcame her facial features. "I'm picking up an energy distortion. Some form of vortex is forming.”

Looking out of the viewport everyone on the bridge could see a swirling vortex of dark energy, its edges cracking with an eerie light goldish light. Nitus felt a chill run down her spine. She like most officers of Starfleet had read the stories from the Voyager.

“Shields up,” she commanded. “All hands to battle stations. Lieutenant, get me a detailed scan of that aperture.”

Before Laura could even respond, the ship lurched violently. Nitus grabbed the arm of her chair, eyes wide as the gravity of the situation reached her once again.

“A large field of debris is leaving the aperture,” Mason shouted from the operations console. “We've been hit-”

The ship was hit again this one caused everyone on the bridge to hit the ground. Everyone on the deck fell unconscious. Debri had hit the port nacelle, and then the impulse drive which sent the ship spinning.

With no input from the helm console the ship drifted towards the aperture, and with all the ship's power cut off the vessel moved helplessly into the aperture as it swallowed them whole. 

Comments

  • Man, that was fast and furious! We get the slow intro before everything starts to literally go sideways! Our heroes try their best, but nothing can stop what happens next - they are knocked out and fall down the terrifying aperture into the great unknown! I am very curious as to where they'll end up and how they're going to cope with it all. Nice work throwing them in the deep end.

    June 19, 2024
  • What an increase from 0 to 100 in like no time. Though it started slow and I initially thought it was going to stay calm boy oh boy was I wrong in that thought. Even with the best attempt there is nothing the crew can do and it shows that every avenue was exhausted. The end shows they have a lot of unknowns ahead of them. I am wondering who they are going to encounter and where they will be heading. This was the definition of just going off the rails! Loved it!

    June 19, 2024
  • All nice and calm, everything seems normal, up to a point. Then they get hit, virtually out of the blue; very little time to react and none to get clear of the danger. Space as unpredictable as ever! Well written, and leaves me wondering, 'what next'?

    June 20, 2024
  • This is a nice, punchy chapter, the pace is great and I enjoyed the blindside feel of the portal and the debris (no pun intended). I also liked the sudden flash to Voyager, its a great acknowledgement of something that must be at the forefront of every captains mind when this sort of thing happens.

    June 27, 2024
  • This chapter had an intense vibe to it. The build-up of tension as the Paramount transitioned back to sublight speeds was palpable, and you could feel Nitus' sense of duty and responsibility weighing heavily on her. Things moved quick from there, with the surge of energy and opening of the vortex. The visual of the swirling vortex of dark energy was vivid and eerie. Though the crew recognised the phenomenon thanks to Voyager's records, it didn't help much. Things ended tense, with a disabled ship adrift and inevitably engulfed by the aperture. Overall, I felt this chapter did a fantastic job of building suspense and delivering a thrilling and action-packed sequence. It kept me engaged from start to finish. 😸 I'm intrigued to see how Nitus and the crew navigate this perilous situation and what challenges they will face inside the aperture. Can't wait to read more!

    June 30, 2024